Comments by Dulce Maria Mora

Comment for "Neoconservatives as a cult..."

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Review of Neoconservatives as a cult...

Cultish behavior in politics!? Ben pulls back the curtain on a well known secret. Yes, many people know and/or suspect something’s up, but the scary part is that the majority doesn’t know or just doesn’t care. Ben’s delivery could use a little more rhythm and enunciation at times, but the piece benefits from his laid back tone. Think that youth are out of the loop and only care about the latest video game? This piece, with its rocking good music, gets even the most apathetic thinking.

Comment for "Military Recruitment After High School"

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Review of Military Recruitment After High School

The subject is controversial and I admire Kathryn for taking it head on. As someone that is decidedly pro-peace, I don’t usually listen to “the other side”. Although I got the answers I wanted, I wasn’t entirely satisfied. The piece is well structured and the interviewing excellent, but when tackling such a contentious issue, I think it’s of utmost importance to present both sides of the coin. Whether you're for or against, this a piece well-worth listening.

Comment for "Raising Grandchildren"

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Review of Grandmother

Monique takes us on a sound rich visit to her grandmother’s. The topic is one we hear often, but rarely do we get a teen’s personal and witty perspective. Her delivery is flawless, like she wasn’t even trying at all. One of the things I love most about radio is listening to the texture of different people’s voices. This piece is a great example. The grandmother has a leisurely, husky voice; Mary Jackson’s is strong, almost feisty. Monique paints a picture in your mind, and skillfully tackles a harsh reality in the process.

Comment for "Teen Marriage"

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Review of Teen Marriage

Hellen describes the absurdity of teen marriage when she mentions “students carry bridal magazines along with their school books.” She then does a great job of being objective and let’s the statistics and interviewees speak for themselves. The subject matter is interesting, and a little disturbing. The actualities are well chosen and reflect Hellen’s ability to conduct comfortable and relaxed interviews. The one small change that would make the piece great is a more natural narration. I look forward to hearing a follow up on Bonnie’s first anniversary.

Comment for "Teen Retail Psychology: Playing the Popularity Game at Work"

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Review of Teen Retail Psychology: Playing the Popularity Game at Work

If you’re a cynic like me, you’ll know what Sophie is talking about. You’ve noticed the patronizing and overly enthusiastic salespeople at “teenybopper” or “trendy” stores; listen to this piece and you’ll understand the Machiavellian forces behind them. Having an expert is important but sometimes sounds stuffy, not here. Stewart knows what he’s talking about and his quotes are kept short and to the point. High quality field recording in a noisy mall is the mark of a good producer, well done. I liked how the actualities don’t just appear out of thin air but are part of a scene, very effective. This piece could work wonderfully in any radio magazine show talking about peer-pressure and the advertising industry. I would only recommend you clarify for the listener when the reporting ends and your personal opinions begin.

Comment for "Losing a Friend to AIDS"

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Review of Losing a Friend to AIDS

Leah wonders why we sleep with people without protection, and as she recounts the suffering of her friend, I wonder as well. A loved one’s irresponsibility provides the catalyst for this poetic and personal essay. The topic lends itself to a more emotional delivery, nevertheless she does manage to mark a clear distinction between the casual “I’m thinking I’m gonna get this big, fat, juicy piece of gossip” and the latter “his bones stuck through his skin coat like death”. The story alone is enough to draw you in, but the eloquent writing is what kept me engaged. The piece is short and sweet; perfect for any show looking to reveal the human side of a worldwide epidemic.

Comment for "Family Separation"

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Review of Family Separation

As an immigrant I have heard stories similar to the ones Jose describes, both from the parents’ and children’s perspectives. I kept waiting to hear more about Jose’s experience. Having so many different characters was a bit overwhelming, but they help emphasize the scope of the problem. A more descriptive script would strengthen the narration, frame the actualities better, and give it a more polished feel. Jose started with a light, almost humorous tone before he hit us with the tear jerking quote from Teresa Vazquez, and then concluded on a hopeful note. This piece illustrates the realities of the immigration process, and should be aired, not only in Washington D.C. where politicians can hear it, but all across the nation.

Comment for "Remote Control"

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Review of Remote Control

Right from the first line, "Why you let him play you like a video?" Alicia’s voice grabs your attention and doesn’t let go. When I first read the description of the piece, I was afraid it might sound gimmicky. But Alicia found a way to make the metaphor work. She not only describes the problems found in some relationships, but sends a message of emancipation. It’s perfect for any show that wishes to explore a young women's perspective on physical and emotional abuse. The writing is powerful, but what I loved most was her voice, so natural and effortless yet strong. The rhythm and cadence of her delivery only adds to the piece. I’m not surprised it aired nationally.

Comment for "Why I Want to Vote"

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Review of Why I Want to Vote

There seem to be two different types of young voters. Those that can but won’t and those that will tackle bureaucratic (yet surprisingly funny) red tape for the privilege of voting. But why does Luis want to become a citizen even though his mother risked it all so he could be born Mexican? Luis tries to understand his parents’ incongruous actions. His mother made sure they where born in Guanajuato and his father can’t wait to return, yet they came to the US for a reason. Luis wants to make that sacrifice worthwhile. But the implications of his actions are more dramatic. I would have liked to hear what Luis was feeling, both in his words and in his voice. The construction of the piece shows that Luis anticipates what the listener is thinking, though the ending leaves you in suspense. Is there a sequel in the works? I hope so.

Comment for "Jehovah's Witness"

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Review of Jehovah's Witness

Gabriela’s mother discovers a religion that promises a joyful reunion with her deceased mother, but she may loose her son and daughter in the process. Gabriela’s intimate essay starts off with her mother praying in Spanish, from here Gabriela leads you through her pain in a quiet and longing voice. Her mother reappears; the stark difference in the tone of their voices and even the two languages emphasizing the emotional distance between them. The prayer returns, the mother’s religious fervor making her deaf to the girl’s need for love and affection. The writing and sound flow masterfully. This short, captivating piece shows a youth’s perspective on family relations and the affects of God and religion in an individual’s life.